Cheeseballs & Springs

This is pretty much where we're going to write our story as soon as we are done discussing everything that needs to be discussed. In other words, this is where the action happens.

This forum is a summary of Chapter One, a very watered down version of the story. This makes it easier to keep track of what's going on, and should help stop loopholes and loose ends being created (for example - most of us have forgotten that before the train crashed, it was on the way to Tajemnica... where an ex-theif taker's funeral was taking place!). Tiny bits of information that get lost as o...

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Jarvis sighs as he settles down into the seat. He looks out of the window to his right, peering woefully at the grey skies and the grey city sprawl of Archenrat. The train will be leaving soon…he hears the “All aboard!” call.

Not that he’s all that excited to get going. He was expecting to have at least one more day to work on trying to perfect his magnetic mine, but that...

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